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She looked down upon her hands
With fear in her eyes
What did she see?
Was it time,
Slipping away like sand?
Was it blood,
Running down like sweet wine?
Was it hope,
Ethereal like the wind?
Was it love,
Burning with a cleansing fire?
None of that mattered to her
To her it was all of that
She opened her mouth
But nothing came out.
Tears ran down her cheeks
Looking around for help
All she saw was a void
Not understanding she was surrounded
By hope and love.
©2008-2009 ~Ejoty
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This is pretty good, pretty intense. It's weird when you right something personal to yoursel and other peopl find eaning in them, just guess it goes to show that we all go through similar things.

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Thanks Spiral.
Yeah, but then aren't poems supposed to reel you in? ;)

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Totally, though they can be used to share exeriece. Maybe something you haven't experienced, but when you really resonate with something someone else have written, it's a good thing :)

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