A couple weeks ago I went out and bought this book called Writing Poetry from the inside out by Sanford Lyne. I figured that since the words were flying in my head like there were frequent flyer miles to be used up, I might as well get better focused. After reading the book I discovered that at least some of the things that the author suggested, I had already been doing on my own, and the new things I have decided to pick up and use. One being a fancy hardback blank book to write my work in, instead of the lined paper school book I had. (Which I have been using for 2 years and already I see my older work fading away in it.
Also lately when listening to either the radio or to my Cds Ive not only enjoyed the songs (naturally!) but end up sitting there at times and in my head seeing how poetic the songs are and how beautiful they are without music behind them, which is a totally new experience for me.
Right, on to the good stuff some poetry.
Voices
Two people walking down the street
In different directions, alone.
One in a fine suit
The other in disrepair clothes
Both are loudly talking
To voices not heard
Flailing arms in heated arguments
Which one is on a phone?
And are you sure?
Ejoty
June 2008
This one needs an ending I think
Three
Words can say so much
He says I love you.
She replies What is love?
They state We hate you!
We remark You will lose!
Ejoty
June 2008







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My goodness!
Thank you for going through all of those deviations and thank you SO MUCH for all the favourites and comments!!
You have an interesting taste in favourites, me thinks.
I really appreciate the support
Thank you again!
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The way I see it, if you had time to do all that I should have time to comment!
LOL... interesting taste is being gentle, quite odd would fit better. LOL
Keep up the wonderful artistic and Naturalist work.
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And I don't think it odd
To each their own, in my opinion
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And the 22 comments!
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Thanks for the Favorite anyway!
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